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Love Has No Age
(#) mwinter 2009-02-06
I say if you let Draco win this fight or the ministry Harry should make an announcement to the whole school at dinner. He should let them know because of the inquest and all that he finds the magical world something that shouldn't be saved. (oh and if you make it so that they lose the inquiry and then he's able to either buy Gabrielle or make it so that Harry has to lose all his money I will no longer be a follower of this story). Gabrielle should also let Harry know that the Headmaster doesn't want Gabriele around and that's why he isn't fighting the expulsion. There for cause of all the manipulation Harry should no longer listen to him/ classes ect. and let Voldemort have the magical world.Author's response
Thank you for your comments. I enjoy reading people's hope's for the commming chapters even if I know some of them won't happen.
All I can say is the truth will eventually be told to all.
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(#) stnssydny 2009-02-06
well this story is not out of the woods to my liking just yet but you're getting there with it. you have particially redemmed yourself with the offer to purchase Gabby but it will be better once it comes to frutation. Keep up the good work and maybe with the next one or two chapters you'll be back in my good books. Until next time.Author's response
Cheers for your note's. I am trying adn hopefully you will like what is to come.
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) leethewong 2009-02-06
I really like this story and the concept, but I think that Harry is a wimp. Why can't he just stand up for himself for once.
Why can't Harry be decisive and aggressive for once. I mean, if Harry AK all the little death eaters while he was in the room with Gabby right after she was attacked, then this whole mess with the Ministry of Magic would not be there in the first place.
If Harry killed all the Slytherins while he was in the room he could totally have gotten away with it. Snape is the only teacher there at the time, and since he owed Harry a life debt, he can't rat Harry out. None of the four bonded girls would tell on him, and Hermione would not tell on him due to their friendship.
And even if Hermione did tell on him, it would be the word of a "mud-blood" versus the "Savior" of the wizardry world.
Also Dumbaldore would never let Harry be prosecuted even if he killed all the Slytherins. And would probably even work with him to cover the evidence since he need Harry to fight Valdmont.
I would like to Harry abuse his title as the savior more. He should active bully the Slytherins to discourage them from join Voldemont. If they (Slytherins) are missing arms and legs then it's kinda hard for them to get the dark mark right? And being the boy-who-lived as well as the "Savior" he should rally the DA to him like Hitler did with the Nazis.
Don't get me wrong, I don't personally like the Nazis or what they stand for, but I wouldn't mind seeing Harry use their tactics to defeat Voldemont.
Overall I can't stand to see Harry just sitting there doing nothing but getting depressed and angry with his self righteousness. I mean, what does he have to feel righteous about? He's just a selfish pervert like the rest of them (Draco and Volde), and deserves no better than the worst of them.
So since Harry's already got his cloth dirty, I say "play mud". Please let Harry abuse his fame and fortune. If his not going to abuse it, he might as well as donate all his gold to the poor and go preach the Gospel. At least someone else will be able to do some good with all that gold...Author's response
Thank your for all of your comments. You seem to want a very vengful Harry and one with emense power. Suddenly jumping into a room a AK everyone on sight, I just don't see it, in any person's eyes it is mass murder.
I don't think even the Headmaster could cover up the death's of four students at Hogwarts let alone the emotional distress it would cause Harry and Gabrielle.
But I have read what you have said, all that I can say is thoes chapters are already compleated and unfortuantlly you will have to wait and see because they can't be changed now
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) Aelfwine 2009-02-09
Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
The idea of Harry buying Gabrielle is interesting--I was wondering if something like that might be in the offing. Should be interesting, either way. That kind of thing is tough to do, but I feel confident from the slow build-up and the basic gentleness that you've established for Harry that you'll be able to avoid the squickier possibilities.
I don't think Harry's any more of a wimp here than he is in canon, either. If anything, he's less of one--the girls are a good influence on him.
Ron being a bit of a git is right in character--I'm curious if this will mean anything for his relationship with Hermione.
That said, don't let me, or anyone else, push you around. Just because one or two vocal individuals say they'll not read further if you do x and y or don't do z doesn't mean there's not plenty of other folk who'll keep reading.Author's response
Thank you for your kind words especially the last part.
I'm glad you are enjoying the charecters as I'm working ahrd on them.
Updates will happen (and fairly soon) it just depend's upon how my writing goes.
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) jamaq 2009-02-21
If you're going to have Harry buy Gabrielle I would suggest that you have the money on hand, so he can make the first offer and be able to pay cash. thereby pouring sand into the gears of others machinations.Author's response
Thank you for your comment, we will just have to see if it happens.
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) Dalwyn 2009-10-17
Yes, Harry's self-righteousness and waffling are annoying ... I can't believe all the sad puppy dog eyes ... when are the girls going to say "Harry, you berk, quit lying to yourself and us about your feelings, we don't have time for that any more!" For that matter, do I not remember Harry telling Gabrielle that he loves her, end of "Evening Classes"?
Even better, why are Hermione and Susan letting Harry give up the initiative on buying Gabrielle? Is the ministry the only party that can sell a Veela? No! He could buy her from her parents before the ministry even makes a ruling. Otherwise what is going to happen? A bidding war between the Malfoys and Harry.
I agree with Aelfwine, don't let folks push you around, this is your story. Others comments, even my comments :) are just comments, and only our comments are ours.
Thanks for writing.Love Has No Age
(#) Dalwyn 2009-10-17
Oh yeah, Hermione can't push Harry to take the initiative on buying Gabrielle, because she hasn't heard or thought of that idea yet, she wasn't with them. Ok, but why is Susan, Ms. Politics/Law, not at least offering that suggestion? That's her job, isn't it? After all, none of the girls believe their defense against Malfoy can succeed.
Though I have to wonder why none of them are suggesting using Gabrielle's memory of the note and Draco's actions to prove the rape charge. Harry has only been spending evenings with Dumbolddork looking at memories in a penseive.Author's response
Thank you for both of your review, each of them are well put.
You have picked up on the Hermione point of not knowing, for Susan the whole group was focuses in not buying Gabrielle. Harry did not want to and they thought that there case was strong enough to let them win. Turning to a friend and saying oh well you are no longer a person you are now a creature is a very big step, and one none of them wanted to even consider after Harry had said no. Luna just says things she cannot see the hurt good or bad that her words create, that is they only reason that they knew about the possibility. So they didn’t want to start any bidding war. Also it would have been unlikely at this point that Gabrielle parents would have sold Gabrielle they would have just pulled her away, the whole purchases was a thought giving by Luna and a plan created by Gabrielle on her own, but I do see your points.
Pensive memories. Is a good point but I look at them and veratisum as the same, they could not / not allowable in this situation. If all crimes used such methods for determining truth then why didn’t Sirius use it as his defence or the Ministry in any of their other trials? I look as both of them as useful but not infallible and so forth unusable in a legal setting, they are tools but that is all. They may be used in the later investigation but we will have to wait and see.
Anyway thank you for your comments they are much appreciated.
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) Cho_Fleur_Nymphadora 2012-05-29
Hiding from religious persecution by the Inquisition.
However...while it's possible to hide your religious beliefs...it's rather difficult to hide the colour of your skin.
And the way you've written Veela, is a lot more similar to hiding the colour of your skin. Part Veela are poor witches, which makes it difficult to hide. And then there are those Veela characteristics.
You've done a poor job of making the position of Veela in wizarding society believable, I'm afraid.Author's response
I see your point but I think on this occation you, or once more my writting, are focusing on the wrong idea. Try to look at Veela as more of a group of individuals and not of a whole large race.
I my inturpretation there are not millions of Veela out there in wizarding society. There are some yes, and it is thoese that find this awfaul place, but the majority do not intergrate with wizarding society. Try and make a comparison with them and wearwolves and you might see what I was trying to say.
However with all of that said I am relooking at everythig and hopefully will be able to clear things up with updates.
Cheers
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) schuster333 2019-06-22
At this point in his story, Hamlet had made more decisions than your version of HP has in this one. Your Harry is too high minded to have sex with an underage adult, but you have no problem putting the underage person in a scene in which she is sexually assaulted. Now, HP can dither endlessly about this entirely contrived purchase, instead of moving the narrative forward.
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