well this story is not out of the woods to my liking just yet but you're getting there with it. you have particially redemmed yourself with the offer to purchase Gabby but it will be better once it comes to frutation. Keep up the good work and maybe with the next one or two chapters you'll be back in my good books. Until next time.
Author's response
Cheers for your note's. I am trying adn hopefully you will like what is to come.
Easysurfing