I really like this story and the concept, but I think that Harry is a wimp. Why can't he just stand up for himself for once.
Why can't Harry be decisive and aggressive for once. I mean, if Harry AK all the little death eaters while he was in the room with Gabby right after she was attacked, then this whole mess with the Ministry of Magic would not be there in the first place.
If Harry killed all the Slytherins while he was in the room he could totally have gotten away with it. Snape is the only teacher there at the time, and since he owed Harry a life debt, he can't rat Harry out. None of the four bonded girls would tell on him, and Hermione would not tell on him due to their friendship.
And even if Hermione did tell on him, it would be the word of a "mud-blood" versus the "Savior" of the wizardry world.
Also Dumbaldore would never let Harry be prosecuted even if he killed all the Slytherins. And would probably even work with him to cover the evidence since he need Harry to fight Valdmont.
I would like to Harry abuse his title as the savior more. He should active bully the Slytherins to discourage them from join Voldemont. If they (Slytherins) are missing arms and legs then it's kinda hard for them to get the dark mark right? And being the boy-who-lived as well as the "Savior" he should rally the DA to him like Hitler did with the Nazis.
Don't get me wrong, I don't personally like the Nazis or what they stand for, but I wouldn't mind seeing Harry use their tactics to defeat Voldemont.
Overall I can't stand to see Harry just sitting there doing nothing but getting depressed and angry with his self righteousness. I mean, what does he have to feel righteous about? He's just a selfish pervert like the rest of them (Draco and Volde), and deserves no better than the worst of them.
So since Harry's already got his cloth dirty, I say "play mud". Please let Harry abuse his fame and fortune. If his not going to abuse it, he might as well as donate all his gold to the poor and go preach the Gospel. At least someone else will be able to do some good with all that gold...
Author's response
Thank your for all of your comments. You seem to want a very vengful Harry and one with emense power. Suddenly jumping into a room a AK everyone on sight, I just don't see it, in any person's eyes it is mass murder.
I don't think even the Headmaster could cover up the death's of four students at Hogwarts let alone the emotional distress it would cause Harry and Gabrielle.
But I have read what you have said, all that I can say is thoes chapters are already compleated and unfortuantlly you will have to wait and see because they can't be changed now
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