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• The Demon Lord

  (#) Nightwing509 2010-09-21

  I liked the way you had Harry tell Sirus off. And then have Sirus get his revenge.

  Author's response

  Err... Harry didn't tell Sirius off.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) stonerkenobi11 2010-09-21

  I liked this chapter. I do hope that something does occur between Harry and Narcissa. I know harry is going to have 2 wives, but that would still be fun. I forget and I admit a bit lazy at the moment, but did Harry have the blocks removed yet? and is he getting the money back from the weasley's? because that would be funny if after the will reading they went to get money from their vaults only to find it gone.
  
  I hope you throw tonks into the mix as well, because well, I believe that Nat Tena is a sex goddess and as she plays Tonks it would be great to see.
  
  Look forward to more

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review mate, things well be explained soon. Yes Harry is going to be with Cissa, as a slave/lover and part demon once Harry is done with her, same with all his slaves/lovers.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) tenspeed54 2010-09-21

  Good story so far. Being a H/HG fan, hope Harry has something really nasty for his revenge before forgiving her. And it will be interesting to see how Dumbly will try to get Harry back in his clutches.

  Author's response

  Yes Harry is going to do something VERY, VERY nasty for his revenge before forgiving Hermione.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Dragonlord27 2010-09-21

  I think whits chapter came out well. On the matter of Hermione yes forgiveness should be hard and she should take whatever punishment harry gives her but like others I'm an H/HG fan and hope she is at some point is taken back in by harry. as for the Weasleys give them all the hell a Demon can dish

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Clooney 2010-09-22

  I like this story quite a bit, I wish you wouldnt try to explain Harry's motivations so much, Have a little faith in your readers to understand some character motivations. Looking forward to the next installment, cheers!

  Author's response

  I have a bad habit at times to put too much detial or too little detial into the story.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Reader458 2010-09-22

  Nice chapter.

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  (#) minerdude 2010-09-22

  I like the way you dealt with Hermione, as they say the road though hell is paved with good intention. That siad I like how balenced this is, showing Arthur and Mione at least having somewhat good reasons for what they did. I hope harry forgives them, in time.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review mate, yes Harry well forgive Hermione in time, but not until Harry hurts her...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Booty 2010-09-22

  The only things I didnt like from the story is
  
  the snake speak with all the extra s's and
  
  Snape not being able to control himself. He may be an ass but he does know when to keep his mouth shut, like when he is in front of the Minister and Head of Law Enforcment and a shit load of reporters.
  
  But like I said it was a good chapter.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Vanir 2010-09-22

  Nice twists. Unfortunately, much of this chapter has been in many many stories. I still like it though. Further, your spelling is still bad, so the extra letters when Harry gets angry sort of vanishes among the other annoying typos. If you simply say that he gets angry, or that his voice becomes snakelike or sibilant, that would do nicely.
  Keep at it.
  It's an entertaining read.
  
  Vanir

  Author's response

  yes Harry is almost snake like, and the reason for the extra s's... I did find a few s's missing when Harry was mad.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Kenichi 2010-09-22

  really like it , nice chapter love sirus telling everyone off and screwing them over , so glad you're getting rid on ron and the weasleys, and dumbles so keep it up

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