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The Demon Lord
(#) Qellar 2010-09-22
Love the chapter. Might I suggest you add this to the Black Family Tradition. Revenge Pranks.....
Looking forward to more chapters...The Demon Lord
(#) lycus 2010-09-23
I loved it, And I read some of the reviews saying that snape knows to be quiet and to act a certain way in front of people. Well he acted the same way in third year when Harry and Hermione saved Sirius, In front of the Minister. I was disappionted in Hermione but she didn't do this for personal gain but to keep Harry alive. And as for the rape thing, no HELL no Harry is suppost to be the good guy and demon or not rape is a bad idea, if he wanted to punish Hermione take away her independance Have Harry become her master for a certain amount of time and lest just say that she gets used to it and likes it. Destroying the cannons is great for ron. For Molly and Ginny make a public announcement about them trying to steal his money and no wizard will come near ginny for the rest of her life.The Demon Lord
(#) lady-baronessmage 2010-09-23
Enjoyed this chapter it had the right mixture of hilarity and sadness.The Demon Lord
(#) firelord 2010-09-26
i love this story thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.The Demon Lord
(#) Katsuhito 2010-09-30
An interesting chapter. Not many surprises, but then as you said before, with the amount of HP fanfic out there now, it's (very) hard to come up with something new that's believable. Either way, the will reading was still enjoyable.
Now for some questions:
1. Why did Harry play at being someone else when he entered the room, but then 5 minutes later announced his identity to everyone. Was it that he's not used to that kind of social maneuver?
2. I agree that Ron will frequently open his mouth before his brain engages, but why would he vent like that to someone he didn't even know (as Harry was still playing Salazar at the time) and thought was a dark wizard? Especially in front of Dumbles and his mum?
3. Draco's actions were also a little ooc, but only a little. While he certainly has the entitled mindset and something of a lack of disregard to rules, even he should have known that while in Gringotts, one's family name (and the resources that go with it) won't help should he overtly violate the Bank's Peace. Especially after the Director announced the consequences out loud at the beginning.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter, and hope for some more action (of whatever kind) soon. :)The Demon Lord
(#) jesterod 2010-10-26
i love this story i cant wait for the next chapter i saw alot of typo's but not bad ones so i could tell what was ment to be saidThe Demon Lord
(#) Kenichi 2010-12-07
please can you continue with this story it's a shame you haven't
The Demon Lord
(#) GoCanadaWBC 2011-01-08
I really like this story.
Revenge for the Waesleys: Bond cumbice for Ginny, and take over the family
Please kill dumnle in an awesome way, (like what Sirius said for him to do)
What are you going to do about Hermione?
What about Bellatrix?
as for the spell you asked about i know it is in either The Heritage or The Witch's Secret both on ficdom
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