(#) Vanir 2010-09-22
Nice twists. Unfortunately, much of this chapter has been in many many stories. I still like it though. Further, your spelling is still bad, so the extra letters when Harry gets angry sort of vanishes among the other annoying typos. If you simply say that he gets angry, or that his voice becomes snakelike or sibilant, that would do nicely.
Keep at it.
It's an entertaining read.
Vanir
Author's response
yes Harry is almost snake like, and the reason for the extra s's... I did find a few s's missing when Harry was mad.