Review for The Demon Lord

The Demon Lord

(#) Booty 2010-09-22

The only things I didnt like from the story is

the snake speak with all the extra s's and

Snape not being able to control himself. He may be an ass but he does know when to keep his mouth shut, like when he is in front of the Minister and Head of Law Enforcment and a shit load of reporters.

But like I said it was a good chapter.