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The Demon Lord
(#) Michaelthegodofsex 2013-01-04
Nooooo I was so in to the story.....pls update faster so I can read your next chapter. Epic story!The Demon Lord
(#) FISHEYE 2013-02-08
Whether this story is abandoned or not I would like to make a general statement that abandoned stories really really pissed. You are a good writer and I would really like to see you continue all of your works.The Demon Lord
(#) Michaelthegodofsex 2013-03-05
Dude lots of us like your story so pls update more. Its been like 3 years. pls update.The Demon Lord
(#) wolfgang108 2013-08-10
I have enjoyed this fic very much. The biggest issue is the grammar, spelling and in one point just the wrong word; but you have addressed this in your notes and I hope the betas help. This is not a slam, I type with a dictionary right next to me. I do hope this story is continued, if not here than on another site, as this has been entertaining. It has been almost three years since an up date so this may not even be viewed and is an exercise of my limited typing ability. Hope to see / read more soon, thanks for sharing.The Demon Lord
(#) Cateagle 2014-04-06
Please, this chapter just cries out for a beta; the mis-spellings in places and occasional wrong word choices (I'd blame a spelling & grammar checker that's not being carefully watched) are gringe-worthy. It's an interesting story and I do look forward to seeing where you take it from here.
I know it's been a fair while since you updated, but I hope that your muse for this story has not permanently departed, because it is a good read. I'm thinking that dealing with Dumbledore and his minions will be as much of a challenge as dealing with Riddle and his minions, and all while learning to use and exploit the full capabilities of the power he now has. {wicked chuckle} I'll admit that I wonder, too, if he'll be intimate, or can be intimate, with his mother's provided assistant or with the Malkins? I suspect he's going to be intimate with several witches, though if it's with Hermione, it'll be as part of a very intense BDSM scene as she earns her forgiveness in a bound manner.The Demon Lord
(#) ToddGilliss 2014-05-28
Start of a good story to give it to all the bad guys, hope you are able to fix others complaints and move forward
I believe that you had also tried this story on fanfiction and had trouble with them and had to change your author name.
Good luck with this oneThe Demon Lord
(#) firetemplar415 2015-04-18
I'm saddened this story has been, from my guess, abandoned. It is so different and the demon lord stuff is hilariously fresh lol.
I hope you could continue this story one day, it is a great story
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