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• The Demon Lord

  (#) md5i 2010-08-30

  I don't generally like to review just for spelling/grammar purposes, but the first sentence of this chapter changes its meaning rather drastically due to a word flub. I think you mean that they were /served/, not /severed/.

  Author's response

  sorry about that, as you read I'm bad at spelling so I'll miss these kind of things...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) chanewt906 2010-08-30

  'As Harry entered the back, he saw Dumbledore along with the Weasleys and Hermione, being severed by a goblin.'
  I like your story, but, please, get your beta to pay more attention.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) sh8ad8ow 2010-08-30

  good chapter altough a little short I was really hoping to see the will reading so please update soon

  Author's response

  yes short, but that is how I wanted it, not only to post something for my brithday, but this chapter is to show WHY Ragnok decided to help a Demon Lord...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) BioHazard82 2010-08-30

  'Harry Potter and the Witches Secret' series uses that spell. Another great chapter.

  Author's response

  Err? What spell? I didn't use any spells in this chapter...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Jester11 2010-08-30

  You are doing a great job with the story. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Biohazard82 was refering to the comment that you made in you Author's notes about Praedia Bellica spell.

  Author's response

  I realize that now :P And thanks for the review...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) BioHazard82 2010-08-31

  I was replying to your A/N.

  Author's response

  I realize that now...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) jabarber69 2010-08-31

  Hey love your stories but as I said years ago in one of your reviews you take to long between updates and you change the story to often, but then again it is your story, no rant just an observation....
  
  and yes I too think Emma Watson looks hot in her new hairdo, so does Anne Hathaway too by the way!!!!

  Author's response

  I have so many stories going on it takes time to update, and I'm a slow writer too. Also, when my muse wants to work with my other stories, I just can't work on the others until my muse is ready to do so...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) chanewt906 2010-08-31

  Nitpicking some of the wording aside, I like this story....But Hermione being bribed?!?
  i really like Hermione, so there should be an incredibly good explanation for this. (steam coming from ears, face paling from temperature difference)

  Author's response

  Yes there is a reason for it, and it'll be shown in the next chapter what it is. You should know that Harry isn't going to be the forgiving kind of person he was, no, it'll take some time and because of his dark and demon side awaking her punishment well be, hush, dark and awful... especially when he sense a dark side to Hermione. He'll be trying to awake that side of her, and the punishment well do that too. So a very dark chapter to come to the story, so be warned...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Reader458 2010-08-31

  Nice chapter. :) And Happy Birthday. :D

• The Demon Lord

  (#) juanjoseso 2010-08-31

  man too bad hermione is against harry and is with that bastard and black sheep of the wesleys

  Author's response

  thanks for all of your reviews, I hope you keep on reading and reviewing...

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