Review for The Demon Lord

The Demon Lord

(#) md5i 2010-08-30

I don't generally like to review just for spelling/grammar purposes, but the first sentence of this chapter changes its meaning rather drastically due to a word flub. I think you mean that they were /served/, not /severed/.

Author's response

sorry about that, as you read I'm bad at spelling so I'll miss these kind of things...