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The Demon Lord
(#) rdgale2000 2010-08-31
This was a very thoughtful birthday present, thank you.
As far as those reviewer who flame... Don't worry about them. If they don't like the story, they don't have to read it. Hopefully they had some constructive items to point out, and not just complaints.
I look forward to your next chapter.
rdgale
Author's response
Thanks for the review mate, I hope you keep o reading and reviewing this story...The Demon Lord
(#) lycus 2010-09-01
I have to thank you for that chapter, since that is how I imagined the demon lord. where he shows anger but he is in control, to where he has allies but doesn't take anyones crap. So as far as Harry being in control you made the story better. remember if Harry was just rampaging around the world he would have too many enemies to count, the controled Harry would use any means to accomplish what he wanted and not just brute force.Author's response
Thanks for the review mate, that is the hopeful idea, Harry using his head instead of brute force.The Demon Lord
(#) Katsuhito 2010-09-02
The plot thickens... :) Interesting choices on who's getting paid by Dumbles. I look forward to the explanations and finding out exactly which Weasleys are on the take. Not to mention what action Harry takes in response. ;) And when are the other characters you tagged in the summary going to make an appearance? I'm eagerly anticipating the arrival of Tonks, Narcissa, and Bellatrix on the scene.
Also wondering if anything more is going to come of the dark elf, or is she just a 'bit part?'
I also add that the use of the Predia Bellica spell can be found in many stories, but I think the Witches' Secret trilogy used it first. That, and another story, "Our Lady O' The Bless'd Do Over," can be found at the Rotaryfile yahoo group.
And finally (and I know you're probably sick of hearing it), you really need to ride herd on your beta(s). I recall your mention of spelling difficulties, so this isn't a rant at you personally. In fact, I normally wouldn't bring it up, but the frequency of those errors in your text detracts from the story. And beta readers should be able to catch those kind of errors. Even the rebeta'd chapters still have them.Author's response
Thanks for the review mate... I'm still looking for a beta reader.The Demon Lord
(#) pheonixsling 2010-09-12
I LIKE this story. I'd like to suggest that Harry might start recruiting assistants, starting with Hermione. I'd also like to point out that the Black will is becoming kind of anti-climactic at this point, unless you have some really weird twist in mind.The Demon Lord
(#) dnightshadow 2010-09-15
I like your story alot and i cant wait for an update, i'm a fanfic addict, the only problem is my fixes are far an between adn i'm waiting for you to update again.The Demon Lord
(#) ranmasaotome123 2014-01-05
This is just plain awesome I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!!!!!!
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