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8. I Know You're Worth It
6 reviews"You're gonna die one day and I'll be there to see you. I'll have to go on alone again..."
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Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-15
Wow that was good! Youre story is moving along quickly though! Im wondering if this all just still a set up still...or if youre gonna rush through the whole story like this. I mean if the story is about frank and Gerard when they are both vampires then youre doing great so far.. but now that hes turning him.. id expect it to slow down a little and be more descriptive and dramatic... you know what im saying----xoxoAuthor's response
yeah, this is just sort of a story where i fool around with characters i guess.
i dont rele know what im gonna do about it to make it more serious cuz i did put alot of random stuff in it just to see whatd happen.
i like to get them shot so be warned for random shootings i guess.
and Franks parents overreact ALOT.
umm... the sequal (sp?) is alot more serious if i ever get that far and ppl keep likeing this one till the end.
yeeeeeeah... i dont like to linger around one topic in the story for a long time, you kno? but ill try and fix it a little...Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) strange_vege 2007-05-15
ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER NOW!!!
hehe, your story is oozing Darren Shan-ness!!!!!!!!!!!Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-05-16
ha ha 'good friends' my ASS!!!!
lol.
this is so exciting!!!!!!
frank is acting a little friendly for a 'straight' dude.....ha ha.
xD....i cant wait to see what happensAuthor's response
lol i kno! ooh, i gotta go update so i can explain somtethin...Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-05-16
i read this chapter again cause i just loved it ^^.
i absolutely despise the artist's song you named this chapter after...so the apeal of it kinda wore off. avril lagvine makes me vomit =P....but this story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good, you could name it after a hannah montanna song and i wouldn't care!
lol.Author's response
uhh, u kno wat, i did name one... lol dont hate me cuz i hate alot of these artists (including Hannah Montatna definately and Avril Lavigne lol) myself, i just liked the phrases from the song cuz they match!
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