Wow that was good! Youre story is moving along quickly though! Im wondering if this all just still a set up still...or if youre gonna rush through the whole story like this. I mean if the story is about frank and Gerard when they are both vampires then youre doing great so far.. but now that hes turning him.. id expect it to slow down a little and be more descriptive and dramatic... you know what im saying----xoxo
Author's response
yeah, this is just sort of a story where i fool around with characters i guess.
i dont rele know what im gonna do about it to make it more serious cuz i did put alot of random stuff in it just to see whatd happen.
i like to get them shot so be warned for random shootings i guess.
and Franks parents overreact ALOT.
umm... the sequal (sp?) is alot more serious if i ever get that far and ppl keep likeing this one till the end.
yeeeeeeah... i dont like to linger around one topic in the story for a long time, you kno? but ill try and fix it a little...