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• The Demon Lord

  (#) lysander 2009-09-26

  going well but mabie have a libry in his moms valt weath the same book he used so he can find out what he realy is?

  Author's response

  Not a bad idea, but got a few ideas that might work for this story, we'll have to wait and see.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) automaticsnow 2009-09-26

  Its decent, but really needs a beta.

  Author's response

  I know that mate, and I've got one, but he is also looking over the first two parts as well, so is taking time. I've posted this as I'm almost finished ch 3 and I wanted to see what people think of this before I post chapter 3.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Cocoa_girl 2009-09-26

  I hope that Harry doesn't become irrational if something is wrong with the account. If the audit says Dumbleore has been stealing money and heirlooms from the Potter vault then I hope Harry only goes after the single goblin who betrayed Harry and the goblin nation. I was hoping Harry could also form an alliance with the goblins.

  Author's response

  This is what the head goblin is hoping for, hoping that if they do find something that they can sort it out before Harry finds out and blames them all, they can deal with the ones that have betrayed Harry and the goblin nation.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) mathmans 2009-09-26

  Are you going to release a beta-ed version of chapter 2? I like this story but it is to hard to read the unbeta-ed version.

  Author's response

  I'm waiting for my beta reader to get back to me with it, if he doesn't I'll be needing to find another one

• The Demon Lord

  (#) zicou 2009-09-26

  Awesome chapter!
  Continuuuuue,
  Z.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review mate...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) Hermyone 2009-09-27

  Really enjoying the story keep up the great work.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review mate...

• The Demon Lord

  (#) NeuroticallyYours 2009-10-14

  Awfull...it filled my heart with hate

  Author's response

  Then why read it???

• The Demon Lord

  (#) BioHazard82 2010-08-16

  Another great chapter.

• The Demon Lord

  (#) juanjoseso 2010-08-31

  what an idiot neuro if he hates it he should shut up and not read it

• The Demon Lord

  (#) pheonixsling 2010-09-12

  Great story so far, recommend some proof reading to catch things like using there for their etc.

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