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Prologue! (rebeta read)
17 reviewsThe Prologue for the story. PLEASE reread and REVIEW, has this has been edited!
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The Demon Lord
(#) skytima 2009-09-16
I usually don't review stories because I don't have anything to say but felt if I said something maybe you'll updateThe Demon Lord
(#) wildcat_9 2009-09-16
awesome story so far, hope you post more soon. awesome writing =DThe Demon Lord
(#) mrpietan 2009-09-16
Didn't read your first offerings ... but this one is good ... Needs a beta to check word spellings though, ie: Creulling .. Crawling....Author's response
sorted... look nowThe Demon Lord
(#) dragonblade3200 2009-10-10
I like the story, though it does feel a little rushed. Really wished I could have rated the story, but it doesn't appear I am able too, need to wait for the next chapter. Update soon!Author's response
you should reread it now, as I've edited it and put more deteil into the story... I hope I have. :PThe Demon Lord
(#) kaptin_hippy 2009-11-16
This is a re-write? I mean, Wow. I've seen bad writting for. but this takes the cake. So, are you in the fifth grade or was that just the last grade you were able to complete. If you speak the way you write, it must be a well known fact in your neighborhood that you're an idiot.Author's response
Listen asshole, as I've already pointed out that I'm a dyslexic and so I'm bad at spelling... so fuck off and fuck yourself asshole... I am 29 years old by the way and I'm not an idiot unlike you...The Demon Lord
(#) juanjoseso 2010-08-31
good start this story rocks I worder what's the incest part is since I read it in ficdom I got to say it may be the clone lily right
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