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• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) DrT 2009-05-21

  Well, that was (smelly feet aside) largely expected. Poor Neville! I hope Dumbledumb isn't behind his entrance
  
  And if Harry Potter could win, Harry Wayne should be outstanding

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) michae1ange1o 2009-05-21

  man this story is funny, Maxime's nipple exclamation had me in giggles. Keep up the good work =)

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) cj_cold 2009-05-21

  Nice chapter.
  
  Why do I think Dumbledore is behind this, as I can't think of why Voldemort would even know of Mary Poppins.
  
  Nice job with Harry and gang getting to know the Beaxbatons girls. Also liked the inclusion of Angelina and Alicia and there views of Harry being more relaxed in this new environment.
  
  Can't wait to see what dates Harry comes up with for the others, nice shot with Victor and Fleur, although we don't know much about your version of him he's a well known sports celebrity and she is a beauty and heiress of Delacour. And if he tries something Harry will launch him into orbit:).
  
  Why do I keep having flashbacks of the Teen Titan's cartoon episode where Robin is blackmailed into taking that girl to her prom:).
  
  Considering how the press reacted to Krum it should be interesting when they do background research on Harry for the Tournament and descover Chef Harry.
  
  Can't wait to see what the events will be, whether you go with canon or originals.
  
  More soon please.

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) dhampirkinfolk 2009-05-21

  Well, half-giant nipples aside, how the frak is this useless toe-rag version of Neville going to survive against a dragon? Unless the dragon in question has a severe allergy to urine soaked cotton.....

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) grim_kos 2009-05-21

  need more
  
  keep it up. this story makes me laugh so hard at times.
  
  i like the non Weasley in this story it makes me happy
  
  keep it up cant wait for more.

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) dennisud 2009-05-21

  Just one mention of the JLA, with the whole chapter all magical. You really have to feel sorry for Neville. he reminds me of Jerry Lewis in his run of movies a poor sap who's simply wanting to have a normal life wizard or not, yet still getting stuck in the most akward situations. While everyone magical and not using much real logic misses Harry Wayne! A Harry Wayne that can clearly clean most any wizard's clock, and now we have the Son of Batman snooping around.
  
  I'm still wondering what Hermione will do with the the Junior JLA(Young Justice) and what her hero name will be? Could she be connected to the Amazons as I had hinted at before or be a protege' of Zatanna and Dr. Fate!
  
  Damn good story!
  
  dennisud

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) NANLIT 2009-05-21

  Great chapter. I wonder how much of the bragging between Olympe and McGonagall could Fleur and Harry actually do and how much is just plain overexaggeration.
  
  For how Neville is in the Tournament, I theorize that Bartemius Crouch is still under the Imperious Curse and put Neville in; it might also explain why Crouch was in a good mood around Neville and even helped him out.

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) Genericrandom5 2009-05-21

  So, after probably a dozen or more 'This author only accepts signed reviews' error prompts over at FanFiction(dot)net I've finally realized I can review your story here. Heh... ^.^;;
  
  Moving along, great story. It's funny, witty, engaging and entertaining, sucks you in, makes you have fun and doesn't seem to stop. You've got a lot of elements I've not seen in any HP story, and your update rate is nothing short of dazzling.
  
  One thing I've noticed as a reoccurring error in your unbetaed work is that you tend to switch gender pronouns in the middle of a sentence. There are certainly worse errors you could make, and the context always makes it easy to suss out what's what, but I would recommend you maybe use the search function on your word-processing software and search for every instance of 'he/his/her/her's' etc and read through the sentece to make sure they all match up.
  
  The Tri-Wizard is one of the defining points in many HP fics, so I must admit I've been eagerly looking forward to see how you dealt with this part of the story. Already you've had a major shift by having the tournament held in France, and gotten Harry into the game legitimately, two pretty unusual switches.
  
  I really, truly am looking forward to see what all will be coming next. Keep up the spectacular work.

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) Cateagle 2009-05-21

  Hmm, I have to wonder if Dumbles put poor Neville in just to build him up as "the boy who lived"; I reckon he';; be apolplectic if/when he discovers the true background of "Harry Wayne". I have to admit, I did love that comment by Madame Maxime. Too, I have to wonder just how much of Harry Wayne's background is going to come out in the publicity for the Tournament? 'Twould be amusing if someone actually made the connection to his birth name. Meanwhile, whoever put Neville's name in is going to be rather surprised by just how good a detective Harry Wayne is, even without resorting to using what's available to him as Apollo.

• Harry Potter and the power of Oa

  (#) bluminous 2009-05-21

  thanks genericrandom. do you think i should allow annonymous reviews at fanfiction.net?

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