Review for Harry Potter and the power of Oa

Harry Potter and the power of Oa

(#) Genericrandom5 2009-05-21

So, after probably a dozen or more 'This author only accepts signed reviews' error prompts over at FanFiction(dot)net I've finally realized I can review your story here. Heh... ^.^;;

Moving along, great story. It's funny, witty, engaging and entertaining, sucks you in, makes you have fun and doesn't seem to stop. You've got a lot of elements I've not seen in any HP story, and your update rate is nothing short of dazzling.

One thing I've noticed as a reoccurring error in your unbetaed work is that you tend to switch gender pronouns in the middle of a sentence. There are certainly worse errors you could make, and the context always makes it easy to suss out what's what, but I would recommend you maybe use the search function on your word-processing software and search for every instance of 'he/his/her/her's' etc and read through the sentece to make sure they all match up.

The Tri-Wizard is one of the defining points in many HP fics, so I must admit I've been eagerly looking forward to see how you dealt with this part of the story. Already you've had a major shift by having the tournament held in France, and gotten Harry into the game legitimately, two pretty unusual switches.

I really, truly am looking forward to see what all will be coming next. Keep up the spectacular work.