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2. Walk Past My Grave In The Dark Tonight
6 reviewsFrank was led to a *much* larger, grandly decorated, walk-in tomb. On top, it had an angel holding in one hand a sphere, and in the other a sort of dagger. A thorn covered crown was wrapped around ...
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Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-14
Youre soooo funny! Dont worry about getting reviews! You should write because you want to... and hopefully you like to! Theres a lot of stories on here and it takes a lot of time sort through them all... its not that people are ignoring you! And honestly I ususally wait unitl stories have a few chapters up anyway before commenting. I like what you have so far... Its well written. I dont know why there were some bold words in the first chap though like schooling? I dont get it. And then you underlined I think 'whatever'or ' wherever' I dont remember! Anyway you said you have more chaps so start posting them. I added you to my alert/fav thingy so Ill be waiting!!!----xoxoAuthor's response
thanks! it means he was like comparing the different home[insert w/e here] and stuff, i cud explain if i could talk! but its sorta hard to on typpin...
comparing:
-homeschooled
and
-homelessbut thats pretty much all i can sey to even try to explain!
thanks 4 readin tho, i preciate ur comment like heckVampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-14
I've only just come across this story and I assure you that if I DID read it before, I'd've reviewed! This story is awesome! It's so well described and VERY interesting. I'm looking forward to where this is going! ~Jess XxXAuthor's response
thanky you! =)Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) A_Fallen_Shadow 2007-05-14
SSSSUUUUUUUUUUUWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heck yeah!
okay now, lemme introduce...
MIKEY WAY!!!!
mikey: well um, hi shady!
me: welcome mikey, to the grand reveiw show! so any comments so far?
mikes: uhh, not really. its really too early to give a decent reveiw. sorry/ T.T
me: its ok mikes.gives tissue and hugs but what did you think so far?
mikes: thanks shady, i think its GREAT! its real creative! i like it! just as long as i can get some more chapters...
me: better reveiws?
mikes: better reveiws.
me: well with that said...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!Author's response
uhh...
okay! soundz like a good thing i guess! thanks if it is!
and i updated twice, dont kill me im scared that ppl 'll b all, "ew i liked it up until now and now i hate it so go DIE!"
so yeaaaaah...
=/Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-05-14
a 'normal house' inside??? ah, that jsut totally ruined the mystery!!!!
the fact that gerard lived in the 1600s makes this story unique.
but i still love the story line.
btw- you are an brilliant writter =]Author's response
yeaaaah, i was thinking about making it all castle-like, but that wouldnt work for the rest of it!Vampires Will Never Hurt You ( I Promise )
(#) horsie890 2007-05-14
That would definitely be freaky. I love it. I don't think you needed the boldface print, though.Author's response
ok ill remember that!
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