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Chapter 7: As Far As You're Concerned, The Next Breath That You Take Should Be Underwater
7 reviewsThe boys are back and there's a party thrown in their honor. Lola has a heart to heart with someone she didn't expect.
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(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-26
aw. all the ficwad girls, lets get loiusville sluggers and go after the couple that broke Lola's heart! hehe. man. i am way into this story. i'm getting all pissy and want to punch someone... :)Author's response
Ha! Leave Jeanae alone...I'm sure she's quite nice in real life.Addict For Dramatics
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-26
i love the brother/sister bonding between joe and lola. the whole ambiance thing...well, i lust after it. thank you for satisfying me on that level.
"What have you been up to?" /Was that a trick question?/haha. i shat myself a little bit. up to this point, alex is the only one who has been able to extract feces from me with her words. so kudos to you.
the stun gun warning was completely appropriate. pete is a douchebag, he knew she'd be there. but gah, patrick...always the good guy. and i love him for it.
i love the realization she came to at the end. the epiphany was perfect.
i pretty much can't say enough good things about your writing, and you pretty much know i'm in love with this story. but i feel like i owe you one of these:
:OAuthor's response
mmmblowjobs....I mean, thank you :) Now I rival Alex in the excretion department...is that good? I'm going to assume it's good. EAddict For Dramatics
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-27
Patrick needs to stop being so damn nice. He's totally pimping off all of Pete's birds. I kinda like it.
I love the underdog.
Again another great chapter, I wish I was as good as the other DoJ girls for leaving long ass reviews but I'm just so out of it at the moment.Author's response
Seriously, Patrick is scoring all the ladies around here. And at least you reviewed, that's all that matters.Addict For Dramatics
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-30
Man. You've got some talent, woman. Dude.
Your idiom is wonderful, the whole thing just flows. It MELTS in the mouth. Or head? Well, take all of that as a compliment. Along with the rating point. Welcome to my fav authors' list.
Thanks for being in the DoJ. :)Author's response
Even when you aren't making any sense, I still take it as a compliment. And I must applaud how you reviewed for every chapter. You, Alex, are the shit.Addict For Dramatics
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-06
love love love this so far. I have this incredible loathing for everything Wentz (except...his lyrics..damnit) so I do adore it when he is portrayed as I believe he is--selfloving and immature. Patrick being the insightful confidant at the end is very realistic too, he seems like the type of person you could spill your guts to anytime.
love it.Author's response
I want to believe he's really not that bad...really I do. But sometimes, he makes it soooo hard. Thanks for the review, I'm surprised you even found this story. It's buried on page 3824820984028409824904820948209843247510. Actually, you can just click my name and view it in my profile, so I'm not that surprised, but I'm still quite thankful. Gah, my rambling...
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