love love love this so far. I have this incredible loathing for everything Wentz (except...his lyrics..damnit) so I do adore it when he is portrayed as I believe he is--selfloving and immature. Patrick being the insightful confidant at the end is very realistic too, he seems like the type of person you could spill your guts to anytime.
love it.
Author's response
I want to believe he's really not that bad...really I do. But sometimes, he makes it soooo hard. Thanks for the review, I'm surprised you even found this story. It's buried on page 3824820984028409824904820948209843247510. Actually, you can just click my name and view it in my profile, so I'm not that surprised, but I'm still quite thankful. Gah, my rambling...