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The Return
(#) yojorocks 2006-08-14
Nicely done, but Why in Seven Hells didn't you use the Dursleys' as human sacrifices? Or transfigure them into a necklace to sacrifice later? Or torture them to death?... yeah, I have a single track mind. Can't wait to see Hermione blow up though, hehe. Good job on keeping it original, esp the ideas of the undead. Just be careful that Harry doesn't become too godlike.The Return
(#) c3markh 2006-08-15
I have loved the story since I found it on Yahoo. I am glad to see it continued. Thanks for writingThe Return
(#) Locathah 2006-08-31
you should really put the notice that the first 2 chapters were from Shezza in the first chapter... I pretty much recognized it off the bat and wasn't sure what to think.The Return
(#) Dragen 2006-10-24
The Umbridge the tord face cow is back... will at least Harry can be killed by an Avada Kedavra... I wonder how people will teat Harry now...
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