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• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) BenRG 2006-05-21

  Well, this is an interesting start. You have my attention and the story is not yet predictable. The Guardian could be Harry but that isn't certain yet. That alone will ensure that I will read the next chapter.
  
  The overall pacing is a bit fast and the scenes could use a little more detail. I'm glad that you dodged the temptation to spend lots of time with the supporting characters, though. It can be rewarding but it usually just bogs down the story.
  
  BenRG's Rating: 8/10

• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) Cwejr 2007-08-18

  I will be reading the whole story, probably in as close to one sitting as I can. I don't normally read "Buffy" but this one grabbed me. The guardian seems like he could be "Harry" or he could be "Trey Miller" from another story series I like (or from the RPG). Anyway, you caught me, I'll go quietly...

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review, if you don't normally read Buffy, don't worry as most of the fic past chapter 9 takes place in the HP universe.
  
  Keep reading and reviewing
  
  GuardianOfLight

• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-13

  Good start.
  
  gunny

• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) biged78 2008-04-04

  I agree with the others.

• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) paulblay 2009-06-26

  I have to say that I don't care for the "powerful mysterious being saves Buffy" start. It's one of the most cliche ways to introduce a character in Buffy fanfiction.

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