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Purity of Blood
(#) zicou 2009-08-02
This story is awesome!!!
I hope to read more soon so... continuuuuuuuuue!
Z.
bye the way, there is a problem with the format.Purity of Blood
(#) jabarber69 2009-08-02
intersting story...but it kinda of threw me at first that is until I figured out that you went into a flashback right at the first of the story... also your style of writing threw me off at first as well, not that there was anything wrong with it your style I mean, it just kinda threw me...I know your confused arent you!, so am I, I now cant figure out what I was trying to say in the first place...
Oh well on to the review: Interesting ideal, about the matrix...although I wish you would everyone once in awhile use a flashback and describe a little bit of his training to learn the matrix thing in the vault!
Also love the flirting and the noticing of the girls around him, he needs to desperately get laid!!!!
Kinda of confuse though that he gave a copy of his mums work to a stranger!?!
Oh and I live Hedwig and what you have done to her as well as Dobby!Purity of Blood
(#) icyflame 2009-08-03
ok ill explain the format issue, you need to copy and paste your chapter into the entree box, get rid if the one you uploaded to the site. the you go through and enter in any bolding or italics. Its difficult but its easy to go back and fix things later. ill read the story when you fix the formatting.
Cheers, IcyflamePurity of Blood
(#) ROBERT_1958 2009-08-04
Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.
-> Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's
orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person.
-> Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is
just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the
Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an accessory to how Harry was
treated by the Dudleys.
Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK and bond to Harry, for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others.
In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.
Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.
-> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,
thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.
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