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Lord of War
(#) Nautilus 2009-07-24
finally, YES... i had almost forgotten about this story..the flashback chapters (whilst very cool) are annoying, because i wish to see what is happening with the present harry and team...
the voldy has flamel concept is new and intriguing...
i'm really excited about the story, it has sooo much going for it..... look forward to where you take it... love the future harry/naricassa aspect... i really think the relationship (mutual agreement, political alliance, or pure sexual) could help define the story.
what role will hermione and the 'old' team play. Remus, Sirius, Hermione. (i personally love luna and tonks, but can't so far see them in the story).
as for draco, i sadly don't agree with you... i personally think draco is a poor character, he does not have the fiber to be Harry's Lex Luthor... draco constantly reminds me of an insignificant pest annoying a superpower... he does not seem to have the same drive to work to achieve what harry has/will.. he also does not seem to have the raw talent that harry does... and frankly you need the combination of both to be someone like harry... i nevertheless look forward to your draco, but for me i am constantly reminded of a pest, rather then an equal.Lord of War
(#) LDA 2009-07-24
I agree with Naut, The flashbacks while informative take you away from the story itself and mess with the flow of the fic.
Draco vs Harry to me is like putting Goyle up against Dumbledore, it just wouldn't work unless you had him go through countless rituals to get his magic up to speck but then he has the drive and spine of a squid...Lord of War
(#) jabarber69 2009-07-24
Hey I love your story and normally I was bug you about the late chapters but then again I saw your a/n note about being back in the states, so I guess you had a reason for not updating...
These background chapters are cool and all but how about everyonce in awhile going back to the present time and explaining what harry is doing as well as everyone else!
And whats this about him and narcissa, hell he ought to enslave narcissa and then hook up with hermione... my experience with women is that if you are friends with her before you become lovers then it is way better...so with that in mind he and hermione oughht to be great together and also from my experience the bossy ones are usually the exact opposite in bed...hehehehe!Lord of War
(#) fic_reader1 2009-07-24
I agree with alot of what was said so far by your other reviewers but what they dont seam to see si that you can turn draco in to a superpower if you fill like it.
I do have to say that harry/naricassa is intersting but I the long run is it relistic I mean she could be a powerfull partner for harry but the pic that you have painted of harry is one of a person that isent trusting except for hermione. that is not to say that you couldent make it work but I see it being alot more realistic if it came to be a relationship of convience. have you thought of not haveing the traditional relationshp but rather haveing a frinds with binifits allalliance with harry/naricassa. also I agree that harry/hermione would be more likly because she would be more likly to be trusted and seen as a equal do to her bilty with magic that you have given her or at least understanding of magic. personaly I would like to see this be a harry hermione/ naricassa. I would realy like to hear what you have yo say if you would respond to ryanguinn1217@yah oo.comLord of War
(#) garsdal 2009-11-26
nice chapter, im highly amused about the flashbacks, but i would like to know more abour the current time.Lord of War
(#) Supernova 2011-07-13
The flashbacks are annoying, if you were going to have them then why didn't you confine them to chapter 1 and possibly 2. We know hes in Azkaban and I for one would have wanted the story to continue from that point not continue to ramble in flashbacks, maybe a short summary of how he got there, who betrayed him and why, then on with the main story.
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