(#) LDA 2009-07-24
I agree with Naut, The flashbacks while informative take you away from the story itself and mess with the flow of the fic.
Draco vs Harry to me is like putting Goyle up against Dumbledore, it just wouldn't work unless you had him go through countless rituals to get his magic up to speck but then he has the drive and spine of a squid...