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The Devil's Lesson: A Prologue of the Death and ReBirth of Harry James Potter
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-03
You know, this makes a lot of sense about Ginny there, and I can imagine that happening, and while others may not agree about the love potion thing, well, if JKR hadn't bought it up in canon with Molly talking to Ginny about it, then it wouldn't have been such a big deal. But she did, and she shouldn't complain when people ask her about it, considering Molly did the same thing to Arthur. Glad to see Hermione in her protecteress mode, and really hope that she and Harry can get it working out, and maybe she and the others can finally put Molly and Ginny in their places.The Devil's Lesson: A Prologue of the Death and ReBirth of Harry James Potter
(#) banner 2008-12-04
I'm glad that Harry realises exactly who is responsible for all the lies and for his mutilation. At this point, I expect that Hermione will never leave his side again. Unless one of them simply kills Ginny.The Devil's Lesson: A Prologue of the Death and ReBirth of Harry James Potter
(#) Mionefan 2008-12-09
Hmm. The story is somewhat erratic in places. This chapter seems a little smoother than the rest, but you've been careless in your need to get the story written. A pass through a good spell and grammar checker would do wonders. BTW James Potter does not have green eyes like Harry. Harry's eyes come from Lily in canon. The subtle shift to demonize Harry seems to be well done, but I'm at a loss to guess why you've pushed in this direction. Doesn't seem to be any real reason for it. The reference to "House" was recognised at once, well done.
It's a bit hard to read this story, since I have to guess at the correct words and grammar sometimes, but the story still remains interesting. Looking forwart to the next chapter.The Devil's Lesson: A Prologue of the Death and ReBirth of Harry James Potter
(#) dennisud 2009-05-28
Is been 6 months and we need more not hanging off the edge of a cliffy for so long.
Please let Hermione anr Harry's combined power make Ginny feel the heel on earth that she'll get sooner rather than later.
dennisud
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