Hmm. The story is somewhat erratic in places. This chapter seems a little smoother than the rest, but you've been careless in your need to get the story written. A pass through a good spell and grammar checker would do wonders. BTW James Potter does not have green eyes like Harry. Harry's eyes come from Lily in canon. The subtle shift to demonize Harry seems to be well done, but I'm at a loss to guess why you've pushed in this direction. Doesn't seem to be any real reason for it. The reference to "House" was recognised at once, well done.
It's a bit hard to read this story, since I have to guess at the correct words and grammar sometimes, but the story still remains interesting. Looking forwart to the next chapter.