oooooooooo
dude i love this story
it's got like this wicked sweet
plot line that makes you want more and
more, GAWD!! what a cliffhanger
you should get a kajillion kudos!
you really should, I wish i could write like this!
Author's response
wuzza kudo?
ooh, im notta cliffhanger luver meself, but i couldnt help it!