Review for The power of the elemental

The power of the elemental

(#) slasheh 2006-11-17

nice lemon, but i must admit the plot is fairly contrived so far...
it simply isn't easy to imagine the rapid changes you included so far.

though i still hope you continue the story, since at least it is original (and i cant wait for some of the reactions to the "healing" :D)

Author's response

The healing I am going to write now.