Review for The power of the elemental

The power of the elemental

(#) TheIllusiveOne 2006-11-15

I'm enjoying the fic, however...

He looked to his aunt, who was still sitting quietly on the breakfast table, staring at him. "Aunt Petunia, I will arrange some money to pay for all the extra food I am eating here, don't worry about that. I cannot help it, but I am very hungry. Is it possible that I can fry some more eggs?"

Having Harry paying back the Dursleys years of abuse by giving them exrta money is just ridiculous.. Other then that though, it's an entertaining fic.

Author's response

You have a point there.

I will correct that in that chapter.

Thanks for the review,

Wim