This story sounds great despite the graammer errors, which can be overlooked, but are you ever going to finish your other two stories especially the "Harry Potter and the Slaves" story? I know you said you had writer's block, but there's got to be somewhere you can go with that fic. I just want you to update that fic because I'm dying to see that story get down really good stuff already and for harry to get hermione back.
You have some great ideas and your stories are really good, its just that you never seem to get past a little after the beginning in anything you start.
Anyway I usually don't review stories because I don't have anything to say but felt if I said something maybe you'll update.
Author's response
I was working on the next chapter of Pet, but I lost my memory stick and I can't remember what I wrote for it, so going to do a few chapters of demon, then I'm going back to it.