Dumbledore doesn’t think it is safe for them to write and he didn’t them to talk about Order business.
(??? This left me very ??? am i missing a word?)
He had not long seen his Godfather die,(Wording sounds funny.)
His friends knew how he was the year before when Cedric was murdered, where he was sent back to the Dursleys and no one to talk to and where angry at everyone.(run-on, and try when rather then where)
I could go on, but t would be better just to get a beta-reader.
Author's response
What do you expect, I've said in my other stories, I'm dyslexic AND I had a bad schooling and don't know the basics of the things I needed to write a story. So please get off my back.
I've got the story at a beta reader now... so we see what happens then.