I think this is a brilliant chapter in that you brought the Mauraders into talking with Harry well. Also I think that with their halp I would love to see how Dumbles handles his mistakes thrown at him.
BTW will we see Fate and Zatanna at Hogwarts? I mean imagine what a gig, bei ng a super hero and your cover is an a Professor at a magical school!!!
Can't wait to see what else you come up with!
dennisud
P.S.- Willw e see How Hermione become a Heroine soon, you DID hint that she would become more involved with the JLA!