Review for Payback's A Bitch

Payback's A Bitch

(#) Dragen 2008-07-09

Another great chapter mate, it was worth the wait, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

I like the part with Dobby and Winky having their 'chat'. And I like the talk with Harry and Dobby about Dobby having sex with Winky and where he can do it. I like that Dobby like watching TV - lol.

I do like that Harry flirted with Madam Rosmerta.

I like the meeting with the Goblins.

I like that Harry getting a wand holster, great idea.

PLEASE update soon.

Author's response

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I try to write the sort of story I enjoy reading. I do have big plans for the Elves, although when we get to the school chapters, they may take a backseat for a while.

With the wand holster, it made sense to put in the quirks and charms that is had. Although I try to temper the level of power available to the general public. if everyone could get a wand holster of ultimate doom, it would mess things up

cheers
dc1