Review for Clanluna

Clanluna

(#) PerfesserN 2007-10-23

A nice transition of power here, where the baton in not so much passed as it's used to whack the men of the clan between the uprights - to get their attention.
"Now that I have your undivided attention. . ." she signed.
Nice way to introduce Lily Evans into the story BTW.

Author's response

Iga is not Lilly Evan, but a distant ancesstor, perhaps.