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Lecacy of Jafar:Book 1 The Beginning

This story is mainly about jafar but has some of the other charaters.Sorry about putting Wil as a main charater.

Category: Fire Emblem - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Wil - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008/06/04 - Updated: 2008/06/04 - 669 words - Complete

Reviews

• Lecacy of Jafar:Book 1 The Beginning

  (#) Anime_Girl 2008-06-05 11:55:06 PM

  Marshello, I can't wait until Ike and Soren show up >.< hurry up and get to that point!
  Some helpful critism:
  Next time, let me edit your story before you post it, I realized I made mistakes with mine, but I'm good at editing other people's crap. And put it in paragraph form, seeing it all together like that is a big turn off, it makes it look reeaaaallllyyy long and boring. Plus, details are essential, add a little more of those, but the words should flow. (Look at me giving advice yet I can't write myself -_-") Good luck, Marshello!!!! :D

  Author's response

  Everyone,
  I will put it in paragraghs next time sorry about that
  Anime Girl
  Thanks for the advice.
  See you all soon,
  Johnnysteps

• Lecacy of Jafar:Book 1 The Beginning

  (#) zullo3 2008-06-07 08:49:44 AM

  Get writing I can't wait to read story #2. The Battle of Senfew. Will there be a plot twist!!

• Lecacy of Jafar:Book 1 The Beginning

  (#) Wolf_of_the_Anbu 2008-06-09 05:15:24 PM

  MARSHALLO!!!! WOOOOOOOOO! WAY TO GO!!!!! but please put paragraphs. it gets confusing without them.

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