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BertxGerard :One Shot:

by KillCaustic 3 Reviews

Bert's Point Of View. Song-Missing by everything But The Girl. I used this as a contest entryin dA.

Category: The Used - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/05/23 - Updated: 2008/05/23 - 490 words - Complete

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  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) IeroMyHero 2008-05-24 11:28:58 AM

    Awwww. I liked this. It was cute. Good job. It was just a little difficult to distinguish song lyrics from the actual lines of the story (wait there were song lyrics, right?) so you might want to italicize or bold the lyrics.

    I love Bert/Gerard stories. I just fucking love them, even if they're sad.

    Author's response

    Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((:

    Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((:
  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-06 12:43:33 PM

    that was really sad....
    very beautifully written though!
    nice job!
    how did you do on the contest on dA?

    Author's response

    Suckish :)) I didn't win, there were so much more better than me xD
  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) sleepyfaerie 2008-06-22 07:06:11 AM

    that was so sad, and so sweet

    I think I read this on DA, but hey, I'll comment again!

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