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BertxGerard :One Shot:
3 ReviewsBert's Point Of View. Song-Missing by everything But The Girl. I used this as a contest entryin dA.
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BertxGerard :One Shot:
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-05-24 11:28:58 AM
Awwww. I liked this. It was cute. Good job. It was just a little difficult to distinguish song lyrics from the actual lines of the story (wait there were song lyrics, right?) so you might want to italicize or bold the lyrics.
I love Bert/Gerard stories. I just fucking love them, even if they're sad.Author's response
Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((:
Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((: -
BertxGerard :One Shot:
(#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-06 12:43:33 PM
that was really sad....
very beautifully written though!
nice job!
how did you do on the contest on dA?Author's response
Suckish :)) I didn't win, there were so much more better than me xD -
BertxGerard :One Shot:
(#) sleepyfaerie 2008-06-22 07:06:11 AM
that was so sad, and so sweet
I think I read this on DA, but hey, I'll comment again!