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• Griffon Reborn

  (#) Particle_Accelerator 2008-02-20

  This is a very intriguing story, keep up the good work. I'm interested to know if you are planning any ships for this story, and if so, who?

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-20

  Verygood here, and going to be interesting to see what will happen to Harry now, what all Lucius will try to do to get him caught, and how things ill play out with both heand Tom in the long run.

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-02-21

  Good chapter, this can go in many directions. Can't wait to see where you take it.
  
  gunny

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) pfeil 2008-02-22

  Hedwig should have noticed that he's free again...
  
  Hope that means that harmony can soon reign again.

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) Alorkin 2008-02-23

  Well done! Harry's release was unexpected, but his shifting from reality too dream was anything but. This is one of the very few 'Azkabann-Potter' fics I have read where his friends didn't turn on him on the slightest of evidence.
  
  
  Ezekial is a nice twist. Is it a dementor, or an angel or something else entirely? It could also be an unkown part of Harry's own personae.
  
  Crabbe and Goyle seem to be almost everybody's 'thugs of little consequence'. They seem unable to carry out the simplest of assignments without constant supervision. Voldemort should just have done and kill them for the sake of the gene pool.
  
  Since Dumbledore routinely monitors the muggle papers it shouldn't be too long before he locates his missinng weapon, so Harry's life will go to hell once more.
  
  As before, I eagerly await the next chapter of 'Gryffin Reborn'. Alorkin
  
  
  
  

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-02-06

  Very good... I like the Ezekiel character. Keep up the good work.

• Griffon Reborn

  (#) Bronze 2015-08-12

  One of the more important things you need to watch for are your spacings. Most of the time you fail to put a space between the I and the next word. Watch that and it'll help with the writing. As HallowsNotHorcruxes said, I like Ezekiel as well. I think he could come in very handy in the future.

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