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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-25

  Great update! It's a pity that Draco was able to kill him, but one of them had to die, and I suppose you've got other plans for Malfoy. He really did get a bit unhinged in the end...it's almost a shame. Not quite, though. Looking forward to more, particularly after Scrimgeour's escape.

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-07-25

  This reminds me alot of that korean college kids. It's what happens to people when they feel they have nothing else to lose and decide to take the whole world out with them. Neville really deserved to suffer a little more for being stupid and indescremenate against the Slytherins. I also think that you should have had him have a complete psychotic break but oh well. Can't have it my way all the time. Turn me loose!!!!
  
  Geovanni Luciano

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Shaggy37 2007-07-25

  Outstanding chapter!!!! Wow thats the way Neville should always die in a blaze of glory fighting. I however think Neville was so hell bent on revenge that it twisted him into something not worth knowing in the long run. I loved what Neville had Parkinslut do that was awesome. What will happen to Neville if he isn't really dead? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) maidros 2007-07-26

  Are you trying to write `Charnel House'? At this rate, the slate will be wiped clean, with no one left in the magical world.
  
  Anyways, it is very impressive to see someone who depicts the war accurately - it always brings out the worst in people, although I must admit I never visualised Neville as the magical equivalent of a suicide bomber.
  
  Hope to see some more soon.
  Regards,
  Maidros

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) PerfesserN 2007-07-26

  You got it in one James, Chaos rules - and she never rules wisely. Neville is definitely more assertive (can you say "roid rage?" - I knew you could!)
  Excellent read all around. N!

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-10-10

  Looks like the shock of losing everything sent Neville off the deep end. Kind of sad. But Neville should have finished Draco off first. A penknife would puncture a lung, but would it really kill him off that fast? Since you said penknife, I picture something with maybe a 2 in. blade. But killing Neville so easily, it must have been a "pocketknife" with a 3 or 4 in blade or longer. Good action! Those aurors weren't too smart, not covering their backs or watching the map for others.

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) merrymowmow 2007-10-28

  I was wondering when you're going to update?

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) dialectically_yours1 2007-12-10

  This is intriguing because it is a different view of Neville and some of the other characters. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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