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Chiquita Banana

by GreenberryHair 2 Reviews

Wondered what a Newsie would be like while the Chiquita Banana jingle came to you at two o'clock in the morning? Well, When I was talking to Sage at that time, she mentioned Jake dressed as Chiquit...

Category: Newsies - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Jake - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2007/06/30 - Updated: 2007/06/30 - 1184 words - Complete

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  • Chiquita Banana

    (#) ShoeGoil 2007-06-30 08:57:13 AM

    Gow! My eyes! This was NOT a position i wanted to see Jake in... but it was well-written. haha. so go figure! (um...next time talk to ME in the middle of the night. the results will be... less painful for Jake XD)
  • Chiquita Banana

    (#) sagey 2007-06-30 02:20:22 PM

    OMFH!!!! still laughing

    That was perhaps the funniest thing I have read since Morrisella! Maybe even funnier...and that is an accomplishment!

    maybe it's just cos I was part of the convo that inspired this but I doubt it. Very very well done and for a song fic it was EXTREMELY GOOD! You never cease to impress me with your ficcage writing powers! Especially with comedy. I'm such an angsty writer I don't do well at the comedy and really really wish I did cos it's brilliant! We should co-write something that's angsty and hillarious >:D Bwahahahaha!

    I kinda wish you had kept "ass-crack...hole" but yeah. In Jakey's voice I can see why you didn't. His explination of things was great and the fact that Roach was fricking smiling at him about it was priceless! :D

    Anyway, I think I can breathe now but my face and ribs ache from laughing so hard.

    Author's response

    You make me laugh! LOL

    An comedy angst? Is that even a genre?! LOL We should do that then. Because I don't think I've seen a angsty comedy before. LOL What should it be about? (I so wrote "able" instead of "about" first and I don't even know why! LOL) Hm...

    And I should start Morrisella back up. I've just had hit a brick wall with it lately. Maybe doing these song fics will help. I dunno.

    Love ya for the review!

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