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A Talk With Dumbledore: Pensieves and Immortality
3 reviewsHarry has a long talk with the Headmaster after a sleepless night. They talk about prophecies, strengths and weaknesses, immortality, and Neville Longbottom. A very "dialogue-heavy" chapter.
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To Rewrite History
(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-02-17
Nice update. I liked the conversation between the Headmaster and Harry. It revealed a lot of things, like the curse on the position for the DADA teacher. But it's still not the best solution for Harry to be wandering around so late because of his nightmares. Couldn't Fawkes stay with him at night or something? I can't wait to see the talk between Snape and Harry. Nice update.Author's response
Well spotted! Harry is realizing, after a week of very little sleep, that he needs a better way to deal with things. He was given the key to his nightmares by Dumbledore in the books he was handed. You'll see him reading through them and gaining some insight soon. Thank you.To Rewrite History
(#) Dreadnought 2007-02-17
I can honsetly say that this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I love the way that is going along in an orderly way. If you make Harry an animagus I have a suggestion. How about a Dire Wolf. Strong, Protective, Faithful, and EXTREMELY LOYAL.Author's response
Thanks for the compliment! I hadn't actually considered giving Harry an animagus form in this story--he's doing so much to control a prophecy (and soon, win a Tournament), that he wouldn't have time to learn how to become an animagus. However, I like your suggestion. I might file that one away for a future fic!To Rewrite History
(#) DrT 2007-02-18
I see a fair amount of folk rating this story OOC, and I'd agree that the first two chapters are. After that, they are well in character with what was set up in the first two or three chapters. The story itself is interesting, and so I make the adjustment. For those stories what don't interest me, I stop reading them.
"T"Author's response
Thank you, thank you...oh my God...the OOC rating is just a bit redundant after chapters 1 and 2... I really appreciate that you can go with the "tweaked" characters after the first bit. -+- I'm verra pleased my story interests you as well!To Rewrite History
(#) Dragen 2007-02-18
What a great chapter, I love how the story is going... at least we hear about the Horcruxes earlier. :D
I can't wait to see what happens next.Author's response
I really had to introduce them at this point. In order to do what he's going to do, Harry has to know what Voldemort did to gain immortality.To Rewrite History
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-02-18
Awesome fic!Author's response
Grazie! I'm kinda laughing right now--this chapter I'm nearly done with will push away some people who liked it before. Ah well. They're kinda like paper dolls, JKR's characters. You can dress 'em up and shove 'em on stage however you like.
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