by lazulisong
4 Reviews the difference between Seimei and Ritsuka - 31_days, 'I am inside soemone who hates me'
Category: Loveless -
Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Ritsuka, Seimei, Soubi -
Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/08/17 - Updated: 2005/08/17 - 295 words - Complete
Reviews
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(#) SchuldigLiebe 2005-08-20 11:37:10 PM
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That was beautiful. I love your emphasis on Ritsuka's ears as a means of showing emotion. And Soubi's thoughts... especially that very last line, rang very true. Great job!
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(#) Katya 2006-01-29 05:15:37 AM
Wow. I really enjoyed this. I like it when people can get into the characters minds properly. This is a nice change.
It really made me think, and I love how... Oddly peaceful it was.
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(#) facia 2007-04-12 05:12:35 PM
Lovely. Butterflies and cats.
Your contrast between Ritsuka and Seimei was both poetic and clear, and truly suited to the characters themselves while sounding perfectly like Soubi's thoughts.