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Not Looking
(#) kissxthexbullet 2006-12-10
Ahh, I love this story.
Ha, she so wants Pete's Peter.
I think I need another chapter.
Yes?Not Looking
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-10
/"What are you going to change?" She asked.
"How I feel about you." He replied without a second thought./ is pete trying to make himself not fall for olivia? or is he trying to make her not feel for him?
As she lay down to sleep she touched her lips and let out a gentle breath on her fingertips, they still tingled where he'd waged war on them. The sparks that flew from her stomach were still setting off and the lust bubbling in her chest was near boiling point. obvious proof that she's already starting to feel something for him. she has two choices at this point. she can either let patrick down easy and go for pete, or stay with patrick and hope her feelings for pete don't diminish the feelings she has for patrick.
The plot is thickening…
you are one amazing british spice, katy. :)Not Looking
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-10
oh snap!
she didnt!
haha i love it!!
tis amazing!Author's response
I love that phrase - Oh Snap! it's the cutest.Not Looking
(#) ZippersOverYou 2006-12-10
Ohhhhhh yeah. That's the stuff. Man, that chapter hit the spot like a good mirage in the desert. Shee, I really loved this chapter somehow the idea of pete doing things he can't control is incredible and amazing. Anxiously awaiting another amazing article.Author's response
Thank you, I'm pretty much in awe of you too. I'm anxiously awaiting an update from you so that make 2 anxious waiters....right.Not Looking
(#) duckapple 2006-12-10
you. me.
Babies.Author's response
Of course - I'll just arrange a babysitter for the 8 we already have and then we'll get to it....Not Looking
(#) LOVELA 2006-12-10
Just when I think you can't possibly get any more amazing, you write a chapter like this and I'm like "shit, she did it again."
May I admire you??Not Looking
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-10
It's all coming together. There's a whole bunch of Track Back-ers and they're paired up from...birth, I guess. And they are destined to be together to make Track Back babies, yes? So "they" are going to make Olivia fall in love with Pete. That's why she's envisioning Pete when she's with Patrick, because "they" are making her have feelings. I think I get it. Please tell me I'm on the right track, so I don't go insane. I'm slightly disappointed because I really wanted her to stay with Patty-Cakes, but it doesn't look good. Oh well. It's still an amazing story and you're still an amazing writer. I think this calls for a rating point.Author's response
Hey Kyle ( I'm just gonna go ahead and hug you very very tight and give you one of my super duper kisses) I'm glad you understand and may I add, you understood everything just as I wanted you to. Thank you for back-reviewing. You rock sweets.
xxxNot Looking
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-11
she watched the tree's whip by, matchsticks -> I really liked the comparison. :)
/"What are you going to change?" She asked.
"How I feel about you." He replied without a second thought./ -> Imagine we could do that in real life. As I know the human race, it would definitely do more harm than good… but I know a couple of people who could really use such superpowers.
"I could never love someone like you Peter, I'll always need someone who can love me more than themselves." She replied. -> Ouch. I bet that hit home. You rule, O. ;)
I wish Peter would just let go of her… :(
If there's one thing that will keep you awake at night, it's a guilty conscience. -> Tru dat. Period. Every single night.
Well, we all know what means: R.P.Not Looking
(#) riaryder 2006-12-13
So, super-quick, up to speed.
She can't do this to poor Patrick! I know it's not her fault, but damn-it!
You've got me totally caught up in this story.
Originality in bucketloads and beautiful writing make this a defo for my faves.
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