by poet_murder
2 Reviews An angel falls from heaven, for want of what God has.
Category: Horror -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy, Horror - Characters: -
Published: 2006/10/04 - Updated: 2006/10/04 - 2404 words - Complete
Reviews
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(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-16 03:10:08 PM
This is so good! I'm not even joking! I love the myth of the fallen angels. It's so good! I will stalk you till you update!
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(#) copperose 2006-11-01 05:15:57 PM
There are a few places where your tenses are off, and I'm not positive I like the frequent repetition of the lack of semicolons in places that could probably use them, but all and all, I like this well enough.