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Family Ties

The Sandaime makes a choice to take advantage of Orochimaru's defection from the Akatsuki, and Naruto finds people that are precious to him before he puts on the cheerful mask he's known for. AU

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Hinata, Jiraiya, Naruto, Tsunade, Other - Warnings: [!!] [?] [V] - Published: 2006/10/02 - Updated: 2006/10/02 - 8409 words

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• Family Ties

  (#) GenocideHeart 2006-10-02 11:13:59 AM

  Good job. Funny and well written. Dialogue is a bit clunky in a couple of places, but all in all, it works very well.
  
  Keep it up.

• Family Ties

  (#) Mastermind 2006-10-18 07:35:23 AM

  I read this story quite some time ago on Fanfiction.net, but regrettably it was never finished there. I was quite pleased to find this here. I really hope you'll keep writing this, as i always did wonder what was going to happen after chapter 2.

• Family Ties

  (#) Aensland 2007-03-11 11:18:08 AM

  You seem to over use semi-colons a bit. Other than that, it's a good start.

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