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so i have finally gotten fed up with the posting issues on this version and with my writing experiment over and done with im working through the initial chapters of the story and fixing a lot of the editing issues that people have pointed out .. not that i think i will get them all by any means but you will just have to deal with that ... im also cleaning up some of the plot holes that the writing experiment created and im thinking of branching out to explain a few things that i originally thought to leave off screen as a few reviewers commented that they felt these things were actually important, im not sure how many i will work on but we will see ...

anywho without any more wasted time the new story is posted here

"http://ficwad.com/story/228347": http://ficwad.com/story/228347

and if you like it and want to rate the main story as well as the chapters please use this link

http://ficwad.com/story/228347/rate

with any luck ill be putting up an edited chapter every 2 or three days depending on if its only minor grammar/spelling stuff or extra/removed scenes

OK well Peace all