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Of Polka Dot Shorts and Nightmares

Sun Hill CID deal with a strange case involving unusual nightmares and child kidnapping's. AndreaNeil romance. Slight X-files Crossover. Better Summary Inside.

Category: Bill - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters:  Andrea Dunbar, Neil Manson - Warnings: [!!] [X] - Published: 2005/06/13 - Updated: 2005/06/13 - 2397 words

Reviews

• Of Polka Dot Shorts and Nightmares

  (#) bride_of_nickula 2005-09-24 01:41:37 AM

  Firstly, the present tense and almost script format is a little off-putting. It's sometimes hard to visualise who's talking when it's almost all dialogue.
  Oh, and "mom" isn't used in the UK. American characters would use it, but I doubt if Andrea would.
  
  However, the storyline is intriguing enough for me to want to find out what happens next!
  
  The cross-over is a difficult format to do well, so I hope you can pull it off.

• Of Polka Dot Shorts and Nightmares

  (#) Roxanne 2005-12-14 05:41:45 AM

  I love this Please write more! I am a huge Andrea/Neil fan and love readind fanfic about them. please write more!

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