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The Ritual
(#) hptrump 2013-08-31
Can I kick Harry's butt. He so exited the wrong door!!!Author's response
Well I agree with you about the door but it seems like Harry's feeling a bit shyer than either of us. He'll get the same choice the next day though. :)The Ritual
(#) ibskib 2013-09-02
It would be nice if the chapters were longer, the story feels a bit disjointed if the updates come in such small bits, personally I prefer reading chapters that's at least 3-5k words.Author's response
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