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Anne's Action For Love!
4 ReviewsAbout Anne when Gilbert goes away,
Reviews
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Anne's Action For Love!
(#) LadyLapisLazuli 2006-10-11 02:39:26 AM
This is really good! I hope you keep writing! :) -
Anne's Action For Love!
(#) glowing_haven 2006-10-21 10:21:19 AM
Interesting start. Will you continue it??????Author's response
I hope so!!! -
Anne's Action For Love!
(#) hobbeth 2006-10-22 12:24:26 PM
I do mind your spelling, and your improper use of words. Since when is hair anemic? Have you never heard of Spellchecker? You can find one on the internet very easily.
The story concept is an interesting one, but is spoiled by your spelling, punctuation and other mechanical errors. Get a beta, if you don't want to use spellchecker, and improve.Author's response
I have never been a great speller so I am sorry if I made you upset....I know, my spelling is really bad!! I am improving and well the other stuff...hum, i will work. maybe -
Anne's Action For Love!
(#) fruit_addict 2007-05-23 03:54:05 PM
good story but lots of grammer, spelling mistakes. spaces where there shouldn't be, points where spaces should be. commas where they shouldn't be etc. should check it over