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No Bargain

Just when Akihito thought he could bargain with Asami...

Category: Viewfinder - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Asami, Takaba - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/07/22 - Updated: 2006/07/22 - 1773 words - Complete

Reviews

• No Bargain

  (#) kira_k 2008-08-18 11:31:25 AM

  I really liked the flow of the text, how their characters came through, how Asami still cared (despite being a bastard) and how Akihito reacted (not exactly knowing how much he could burn himself).
  
  However, the story felt unfinished. It felt unfair to stop after the hair ruffling, as I (the reader) didn't get to know Akihito's reaction. Did he resist or did he comply? I couldn't decide- Akihito could go both ways and I wanted to know which way he chose.
  

• No Bargain

  (#) Vermouth 2009-09-24 09:58:47 PM

  Man..please continue the story, okay? cuz i feel very unsastified at the ending

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